I printed this area (upper right) again, so it blends better. I am satisfied with this piece at this point - but will wait a few days before proceeding with the quilting. I will want to do something to emphasize that horizontal element. I feel like some dark heavy stitching there will be important. I am also thinking about adding more text in that area - perhaps I will write some things myself rather than doing more screen printing. Going to let things gel for a while, though. I am not really sure about the whitish horizontal element. It sort of bothers me and I may end up just ripping it off before I do the quilting. Stay tuned!
I like what you have done with the light area in the corner. I also like the horizontal white element... to me, it creates a focal point. If you remove it, somehow I think you will lose that, but if you do the stitching it would emphasize the element.
ReplyDeleteNot sure what you're going for here, but the white horizontal keeps reading as a frozen river to me.
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