I like the circles and I think the white strips are necessary. I am now struggling with the yellow vertical lines in the lower right. I feel something should be there to balance the bright pop of color in the upper left corner. I think maybe less strips or maybe a more muted color.... Am I getting close?
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I'm really struggling with this one. I think it's the colors that simply are not appealing to me and the disjointedness of the various textures in the two pink pieces. That being said. I like this introduction of yellow "sticks" and think I would like them even better if they were brought down into the circles below - actually going over the edge and through the centers of those rings. It would give a similar effect as the yellow flashes in the hand-dye above.
I like the yellow but,maybe a horizontal placement would be a repeated design.
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